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@Participants:	JPN005
@Age:	24
@Sex:	F
@YearInSchool:	M1
@Major:	other
@StudyHistory:	9
@OtherLanguage:	French=1;none=
@Qualification:	STEP=2(?);TOEIC=595(2004);none=
@Abroad:	none=;none=
@Reading:	4
@Writing:	4
@Listening:	4
@Speaking:	4
@JapaneseEssay:	5
@EnglishEssay:	3
@Difficulty:	4
@Topic:	water pollution
@TWE:	3;3;3
@Comments:	
@Coder:	2005-12-21 DataInputBy SAKAUE Tatsuya;
@Version:	2.0
*JPN005:	Water problem in some village
%NTV:	Water problems in some villages
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*JPN005:	I am interested in rural development, so I want to choose the topic of the water pollution.
%NTV:	I am interested in rural development, so water pollution is an important topic for me.
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*JPN005:	I think that water pollution is related to sanitation and agricultural system because when I visited some village in Cambodia, villagers said to me that they were not satisfied with the quality and quantity of water.
%NTV:	I think that water pollution is related to sanitation and agricultural systems because when I visited some villages in Cambodia, the villagers told me that they were not satisfied with the quality and quantity of water available.
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*JPN005:	They had one of the water hand pomp and they used it for drinking and the paddy land.
%NTV:	They had a hand water pump and they used it for drinking and for the paddy land.
%COM:	Do you mean "for watering the paddy land"?
*JPN005:	The quality of water from the hand pomp was not good because they didn't dig the land deeper to set the hand pomp.
%NTV:	The quality of water from the hand pump was not good because they did not dig the land deep enough to properly set up the pump.
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*JPN005:	Then how can they get enough clean water?
%NTV:	How can these villagers get enough clean water?
%COM:	
*JPN005:	I think that the hand pomp is not enough to get clean water, so I want to recommend them to dig deeper well for public.
%NTV:	I think that the hand pump is not enough to get clean water, so I want to recommend them to dig a deeper well.
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*JPN005:	I think that the deeper well has to be public for all of the villagers to utilize it.
%NTV:	I think that the deeper well has to be public so that all of the villagers can use it.
%COM:	
*JPN005:	And I heard that the villagers also used water from rain fall but they had a problem with the quality of rain fall, too.
%NTV:	I heard that the villagers also used water from rainfall but that they had had problems with the quality of the water from the rainfall.
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*JPN005:	Therefore I want to tell them to use a filter when they drink water from rain fall because they will be able to get cleaner water through the filter.
%NTV:	Therefore, I want to tell them to use a filter when they drink water from rainfall because this would allow them to get cleaner water.
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*JPN005:	I found that they had some problems with quantity of water when they create crops especially rice.
%NTV:	I found that they had some problems with the quantity of water when growing crops, especially rice.
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*JPN005:	They pulled water from the canal but it was far from the rice field, so they could not get enough water to grow rice.
%NTV:	They pulled water from a canal, but because it was far from the rice field, they could not get enough water to grow rice.
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*JPN005:	Some villagers dig another canal by themselves but the distribution of water was not fair.
%NTV:	Some villagers dug another canal by themselves but the distribution of water was not fair.
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*JPN005:	People living near the canal pulled much of water to their land, so I thought that the village had to establish the fair system of water distribution.
%NTV:	People living near the canal pulled much water to their land, so I thought that the village needed to establish a fair system for distributing water.
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*JPN005:	Then how can they get fairer water distribution?
%NTV:	How can they get fairer water distribution?
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*JPN005:	I think that the monitoring system is important and the water union will be able to help villagers to distribute water fairly.
%NTV:	I think that a monitoring system is important and that a water union would help villagers to distribute water fairly.
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*JPN005:	Therefore I want to recommend them to establish the strong water union having monitoring system of water distribution.
%NTV:	Therefore I want to recommend that they establish a strong water union having a system for monitoring water distribution.
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*JPN005:	I think that the rural development will be achieved when the villagers are willing to participate in some activities voluntarily, so I cannot force them to join the promotion of development.
%NTV:	I think that rural development will be achieved when the villagers are willing to participate in activities voluntarily, so I cannot force them to join the promotion of development.
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*JPN005:	The cooperation with the villagers and researcher will make better results.
%NTV:	Cooperation between the villagers and researchers will make better results.
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*JPN005:	Therefore we have to hear the needs of the villagers.
%NTV:	Therefore, we have to listen to the villagers' needs.
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*JPN005:	I think that the hearing process is so important.
%NTV:	I think that the listening process is crucial to successful rural development.
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